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You believe don't you? by ~enistoja:iconenistoja:



It all happened so fast-- I didn't have time to think!
I had to run, see? I had to! Faster, EVER FASTER!!! THEY WERE CHASING US!
They were. . . HUNTING US DOWN!
Taking us one by one. . . Striking from the shadows, swooping with their rotting limbs, their fetid breath bathing our necks. . .
Soon I heard them. . . the voices of those who had joined me. . . Moaning in pain as tortures not known by mankind was inflicted on them. . . designed only for joy of those horrible beings!
Those creatures. . . no, those MONSTERS would have killed me! And if we all died, then what would have been the purpose?
I left them behind, let those demons have their will. . . because I had to!
Had I stayed. . . had I tried to help. . . THEY WOULD HAVE WON!
Those monsters-- their horrific mouths spouting their venom towards us, their eyeless faces turning towards us, reaching for us shrieking their never-ending moans of suffering, of the suffering they urged to pass on to someone else. . .
THEY HAD TO BE STOPPED!
I. . . I closed the gate to that void. . .
I left my friends to die. . . I killed them. . .
BUT I HAD TO!
There was nothing I could do! It's what they would have wanted. . .
Yes. . . they would have wanted that! TO HAVE A MEANINGFUL DEATH!
HAH! OF COURSE THEY WANTED THEM MONSTERS TO BE STOPPED!
I ran. . . I came here. . . to tell you. . . to WARN YOU! IF THEY BREAK THROUGH THE PORTAL, WE WILL ALL BE DOOMED!
I had to do it. . . I had to!
You. . .you believe me. . . You have to. . . You believe me. . .
Don't you?
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Author's Comments

Okay, this one was written entirely for :iconroninuk: 's project
Hope he approves, and that this somehow fits into the Dark Hoard
HE'S THE ONLY ONE WHO'S GOT PERMISSION TO USE THIS ANY WAY HE SEES FIT (no alteration, please)
:iconmechaganon: edited a few things ^^; thanks a lot!!!!

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:iconenistoja:
:3 HORROR JUNKIE!!!

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With my metallic wings and my wooden sword, I shall protect that which I love the most!
Avatar by ~pyromaniac0alchemist

I'm a freak, and don't find the word to be harmful. I'M A FREAK AND FREAKING PROUD
:iconroninuk:
Love it. There's a place for this type of short, evocative piece in the book.

If you like - post your work here.. get feedback, make changes if necessary, then email me the final version - sound good?
:iconenistoja:
Thanks for the positive feedback!
That was the idea, I've asked several people their opinion, it may change a bit, but the main idea remains the same

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With my metallic wings and my wooden sword, I shall protect that which I love the most!
Avatar by ~pyromaniac0alchemist

I'm a freak, and don't find the word to be harmful. I'M A FREAK AND FREAKING PROUD
:icondoomendookusai:
He'll definetely aprove this :] This is ... well.. You're a genius :] you should start writing a book n_n

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Can't take the kid from the fight
take the fight from the kid
Sit back, relax
Sit back, relapse again
:heart: P!ATD
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92% of teens moved on to rap music.
If you're part of the 8% that rock out everyday, put this in your signature
:iconbarsine4k:
Nice work!

poor man...

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I am as constant as the Northern Star, constantly in the darkness...
:iconenistoja:
:blush: thanks! :hug:
I'm already trying, but I'm not really sure what to make the story about (I've got the world, the deities, and a general idea of the world's history. . .)

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With my metallic wings and my wooden sword, I shall protect that which I love the most!
Avatar by ~pyromaniac0alchemist

I'm a freak, and don't find the word to be harmful. I'M A FREAK AND FREAKING PROUD
:iconenistoja:
thanks!
You should try to write something like this, too!

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With my metallic wings and my wooden sword, I shall protect that which I love the most!
Avatar by ~pyromaniac0alchemist

I'm a freak, and don't find the word to be harmful. I'M A FREAK AND FREAKING PROUD
:icondoomendookusai:
That's amazing :] i started to write a book to, but in the end all my ideas appeared to be stolen from somewhere xD

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Can't take the kid from the fight
take the fight from the kid
Sit back, relax
Sit back, relapse again
:heart: P!ATD
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92% of teens moved on to rap music.
If you're part of the 8% that rock out everyday, put this in your signature
:iconenistoja:
heh well, many ideas are already used, but what is unique about us is that we can always think of new ones :D
You should try, I know you'd do great n_n

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With my metallic wings and my wooden sword, I shall protect that which I love the most!
Avatar by ~pyromaniac0alchemist

I'm a freak, and don't find the word to be harmful. I'M A FREAK AND FREAKING PROUD
:iconbarsine4k:
hehe... I'm writing something spooky... it's called:
Informe de Proyecto Terminal... aaahhhh!!!!
*hides under the table*

*looks around before coming out*
now... being serious... I'll add it to my to-do list

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People call me human... I don't believe them

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